Black Ghost

This was pretty good. You had really good description throughout, and I didn't really spot any typos. The only thing I would change is the end, with the shadow. It's ...

I'm sorry to say that I thought this movie kinda failed plot-wise. The action was good, but I really think the first two movies were MUCH better. There were too ...

8/10 I want summer to come too.

Haha, pulling a Brad.... And I agree that this poem has no meaning whatsoever and that you should lose the elipses. Start over on some other poem and don't worry ...

I really liked this, actually! I thought it was well written and you really gave a good setting description about the world the story is in without info dumping or ...

Prologue A young girl draped in rags looked carefully over the corner of the wall, and saw that the door to the next apartment was ajar. Her muscles tightened as ...

This is one of those stories that actually kept me reading till the end. Nice Job. Although, it seemed as if you were building up to something more dramatic than ...

If it isn't your poem, maybe you should include the author's name?

magic!

Nice!

Congratulations, Snoink, it must have been so cool to complete your novel!

I do that sometimes, actually! See, for my story I wanted to call it "The Oil Mark" because it just sounded cool to me, but it didn't fit at all ...

Didn't Ellen Foster have no speech marks? I can't remember. But anyway, I think that lack of grammar in some places can be effective, like in Ellen Foster, so we ...

I LOVE EVANESCENCE! And yeah, there is no swearing at all, and the lyrics don't really have a set meaning (Except Call Me When You're Sober) so you can pretty ...

I should go see that movie soon...